I'm still hanging from your chain-- hypnotized and tantalized by your fingers near my body. I miss the familiar fall of limbs, together . . . we saturated sheets with passion they can't sell, and I tangled myself to you--it went longer that way. You always let me have my fantasies, but don't excuse me this time--it's not ours. I beg, and you keep swinging bells in my ears. |
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This one goes back slightly from the others in the set . . . it's a little more happy, but entranced . . . which can be a bad thing.
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  A muse can last forever. It kinda sucks that way that you have to think about them that much, but it sometimes can't be helped. I've got the same situation where someone is going to be my song always.
Excellent piece and deep insight   -- -------- Don't think of dying. That bridge hasn't been built for us yet.  Over a year ago or so, I used to just think about them, but now that I write more, I'll easily write so much about a particular person. It's part of the reason I don't tell most of them that I write.
 Thank you for commenting and for your insights into the poem. -- I adopted ~djthedj and ~ wanderingjizo through ~daac, and I unofficially adopted ~ Ariga.  Are you *featureD?  I am a ~phoenixproject supporter. Thank you!
-- I adopted ~djthedj and ~ wanderingjizo through ~daac, and I unofficially adopted ~ Ariga. Are you *featureD? I am a ~phoenixproject supporter. Wanting to avoid them knowing is the whole reason I took the name "hidden." An ex of mine who is still my muse is on dA, and I didn't want her knowing it was me. And after like four months, she finally figured it out, lol.
-- -------- Don't think of dying. That bridge hasn't been built for us yet. I only know of a few people who know of this site in my life--the two who told me about it (but still aren't on it), and the few others I have told it to.-- I adopted ~djthedj and ~ wanderingjizo through ~daac, and I unofficially adopted ~ Ariga. Are you *featureD? I am a ~phoenixproject supporter.  Wow. This is a great piece! I think its amazing. The description of emotions is great. I think you should be proud of yourself for writing this!
Greg -- To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable... To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility... -Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]  I wanna be your muse.
-- there is more.  Thank you!  That's such a nice compliment! I feel honored that you find it amazing. -- I adopted ~djthedj and ~ wanderingjizo through ~daac, and I unofficially adopted ~ Ariga. Are you *featureD? I am a ~phoenixproject supporter. |
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